Under the Olive Trees - Part I

Well, there is the beginning of the second chapter in John and Paul's Travels, titled "Under the Olive Trees". I promised five pages in my journal, but unsurprisingly, I finished only these three in time.
Hope these pages will wake your interest, for this promises to be a good story for one made by me.
Stylistically this is a combination of the good sides of the JP's first chapter and the "Words". And it is much improved from those two in general, I dare to hope.
What do you think?

For those new to my gallery, there is a finished seven-page story of John and Paul further down in my gallery. Check it out if you want to get some inkling of what is going on.
On the other hand, it may only make you more confused.